Although the story was really short, I feel that the point was made. Interesting plot twist at the end. Would have loved this story to be extended with more drama.
Good but needs improvement
It was a short but pleasant read. My main critique are why was the girl in the hotel, who was she, who was she always talking to on the phone, what was her business in town? Next, a girl drinking a whole six pack of beer and eating a bunch of burritos seems unlikely. Also, why would she watch a scary movie if she is afraid of the dark. On the other hand it had a good ending.
They dont exist
By Sassy casi
This was not a very interesting book...AT ALL. I hated the language, i hated the way the author made the charectors sound..."bad." But, i did like the ending.
This book was so great, that I am going to tell all my friends and family about it.
Best horror story
I'm definitely reading this book at a campfire
Sort And Sweet
By Hell Burns Inside You
I wasn't really scared at all throughout this in the least but, I absolutely love the ending. The ending leaves it feeling complete and it was just overall a good ending, hence why I give it 5 stars.
They don't exist
Cool short story and ending was unexpected.Worth a read.
Creepy and eerie
By DTM Soulless
Very good kind of had an overhang of dread at the end. *Spoilerish* Also really liked the tv twist towards the end.
Great short story - creepy from start to finish!!
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