The Vampire from Hell: (Part 1) - The Beginning Book Reviews

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Amazing. A must read! I'm Very excited for part two!

Personal preferences prevented. I'm sorry to say that my own distaste for stories written in the 1st person perspective stopped me from finishing the first chapter. From what I did read, it was something I'd have thoroughly enjoyed if it was in the 3rd-person.

The Vampire From Hell. This was a really great read! I'm dying for more!!!!

Fun. This was a fun read. Looking forward to the next installment

The Vampire From Hell. Well Written! Ms. Thomas Impresses With Feeling of The Character and Reader.

Pretty great read!. Definitely a new twist on your average vampire! And I am definitely a fan of "The House of G!" I know that some people say that the book is unrealistic. But it's paranormal for a reason people! You want reality go watch the news or read a history book ( just make it an old copy so you know it's actually realistic ). But if you're a sci-fi fan or love anything paranormal then read this book. You just may like it! Some minor editing errors, but of course I can normally find one or two in most books.

Great!. Great book !(: I don't read lol but it was really grasping and couldn't stop reading can't wait to read the next book

Absolutely horrible.. I can't believe someone would actually write this garbage. This story was horribly written in a witty sense. It's a very short story, but after reading this book, I couldn't bear to read the excerpts from books 2 and 3. This is possibly one of the worst books I've ever read. Thank goodness it was free. I was expecting way more. Disappointed.

Come on!!. Ok I hav read this twice already!!!!! Where is PART TWO?!?!?!

Great beginning. I can't wait to read more!

Gj. Very nice work

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️. Love this Book really recommend it

Cute read. This was a cute story I thought could have went on into a novel. A easy read. I recommend it.

Just okay. A good author, but not the best story.

The vampire from hell. I wan't more!

Great story. Endless potential!!! Can't wait for more! Please upload soon

Interesting story. This is a different take on vampires and heaven and hell. Not too bad, though there needed to be a lot more editing, but it did lack some description and explanations. Overall the story kept me interested until the end but I would have liked to know more about what was going on, like who was the voice in her head and how are they able to get iPhones and Internet in heaven and hell and what is the P word?

It was great!. It had a few spelling errors, but so what, I hadn't felt like I had read more than 10 pages. It sucked me right in until I was finished. Then I was left thinking, woo woo WOO! I want to read more. I suggest it to all.

Best book ever. Best book ever

Love it!. You did a great job! I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more!!

When is the rest coming. Loved it!!!! When will the rest be done.

Great. I don't read a lot but when I saw this book a read the summary I had to read it. I read it and it was great and I can't wait for part 2.

The Vampire from hell: the beginning. Amazing....how long before the next one comes out!?!?

awesome. this portion was great i cant wait for the whole thing!

Great Read. I think this was well written and very interesting. Although I enjoyed this and highly recommend it, I believe that it could have been expanded into a novel. :)

The vampire from hell:the beginning part 1. This was great...looking forward to reading the next book in the series

Potential. Really excited for the development of this new story line. The teaser was great Looking forward to more of Rayea

Part 2?. I really enjoyed the story, and I am waiting for a continuation

Vampire from Hell. I have read over 20 to 30 vampire books in the last eight years. Vampire from Hell was an interesting find after I finished Thirst by Christopher Pike. I would have loved Vampire from Hell a lot better had you gone into more detail as to what Rayea looked like or what she wore. I was also confused about Blick, I couldn't tell if he had changed to human form when he was comforting Rayea in her office or if he had remand in his dog like form. Over all it was as I said before an interesting fined.

Amazing. This book has great potential. Can't wait to see what happens in the next installment. This is a mist read!

Simplistic but fun. I like the story but it is forecastable. You know what is going to happen but you keep on reading anyway.

Great read. This was a great book, but so short. I am eager to read the next part! Can't wait!

Awesome sauce. This is an amazing book. I can't wait to read the next books. - Samantha

Vampire from hell. This was a really good start to this book and I would LOVE to read the finished edition of this book! Hope you finish it(: look forward to reading it.

Ohh Emm Gee!!. Is there a date set for part two to come out b/c im dying to know what's gonna happen next?!?!?!

Good Read!. I really liked the book. I gave it three stars because it was so short! I can't wait for book number two! Nice new twist to a vampire story.

Ally thomas. Loved it can not wait for next one, good story loved the story line and chars so far

Vamp from hell. Surprisingly good twist and start. Can't wait for the next part :)

Review. I thought it was pretty decent. It held my attention. I gave it only four stars because I would like to see more on the story. Definitely a good plot line.

I <3 books. Very good book just needs more chapters to read

!. It was way to short but I like it so far.

Vampires, hellhounds, & demons; oh my.. Interesting start. Pretty short, so hard to know what is going on or real quality of work....but I'll look for more

Awesome. This is awesome but it is so short:):(

Not for adults/serious readers. Not for adults/serious readers.

Love it!. I would recommend this book to every one it's so amazing I have read it like 20 times already I really want part to come out so BAD!!! PLEZ make another!

Awesome. It's awesome but yes too short, waiting for more,

Amazing!. This book is amazing I'm really looking forward to it in the future!!! It's a new favorite of mine!!

Wonderful. I really enjoyed this book. Waiting for more

The vampire from hell. It was good n interesting I can't wait 2 read more bout it , it was really great

Bring on part 2!. Excellent story. I am seriously and anxiously awaiting part two

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Vamp brought up by the devil, working for god!. This was an awesome and alluring little read. More please.

Awesome.. Loved it ! Like the style it's wrote. Can't wait for more. Great short read.

vampire from hell part 1. to short

The Vampire from hell. Way to short, this story should kept going. A Vampire daughter of Lucifer, who has an I-phone and likes shopping brilliant story but ends as your getting into it. More Mr Thomas please.

...can't wait til the next installment. Really enjoyed. Please don't make us wait too long!

The vampire from hell. Absolutely brilliant.

Really good :D. This is really good , you should continue The story

Meh. All in all, not fantastically written. Everything seems very rushed and basic, with very little description of, well, anything. I got about halfway through and stopped reading; I just didn't find it at all engaging. The characters seemed very flat, and a lot of the events were predictable. I wasn't expecting much, and I have to say, I got what I expected.

Is good when's the next one ?. Its a really good book but I want to know when is the next part arriving it says continues in 2011 and well it's 2011 now and where is it ?

Brilliant. A very nice book haven't finished it yet but can't put it down, I specially like the way ally writes his book its so understandable, I'm defiantly going to buy his part 2 you have a new fan mr ally, I'm not missing any of your books!!!

Great!. Can't wait for the rest! ;-) don't leave us hanging to long please!

Really good read where's the next part. Wasn't expecting this to much good being free But wow I really enjoyed it And really want to read the next part If this was sale at say 2.00 a download I would happily buy

Vampire from hell. Can't wait 4 next part

Boring boooorrrriiiinnnngggg. Slamming my finger in a car door is more exiting than that book I hate it Don't get it

:). Please hurry with the next parts.

Great. This is a great book and I really enjoyed it I do reccomened and I can't wait for the next part

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Great!. Great book can not wait for the next part!

OMG. this book is awesome I just love it all I won't to do is read all of them

The Vampire from Hell. Ally Thomas y. The Vampire from Hell 2/10 Free iBook. Rambling style and a storyline lacking sense or logic.Two dimensional characters. Don’t bother reading this. Oh, and it’s not actually a book that finishes, it’s a series.

The vampire from hell. A really good read but could have been a bit longer

Worth reading. Good storyline wish it was a lil longer just waiting on the next one now :)

Dannii <3. Loved reading this .. Keep them comming =)

Vampire from hell. Loved it can't wait to read the full story

Interesting story. Different take on the devils child type story. Short, light and funny but only if you can get past the grammar errors.

Amazing. I really liked this book, keep up the great work, looking forward to the next installment :)

Good beginning. This is a rather novel concept and an interesting take on a genre vastly over done; vampires. The story flows well, with a good sense of future character development. It's gripping and exciting. There are quite a few spelling errors, which was rather annoying. I would have really liked more scene setting and world development. It's a light, easy read if you like vampire mythology.

The vampire from hell. Great book enjoyed reading it.

Great book. This might be a small book but this book has its fangs deep in you in the first couple pages. I hope to read more of your work of this new series in the near future.

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Awesome short storie!!!!!!!. Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to read the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!! Adèle (Dédé) <3 <3

Liked it. I enjoyed this story and hoped for it to longer. Thanks for the story.

Awesome!. This book was good! When's part 2 coming out?

:). I can't wait for the next books!!

wow. im sooo reading the next one! this should be made into a movie!!!

Awesome. Really great short story!