The Beginning of Everything Book Reviews

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The title says it all. I’m still fairly new to Kristen Ashley. To date, I’ve read maybe a third of her books. That said, this is the first fantasy/paranormal series I’ve read of hers. And I admit, I didn’t start this series until all books were available. I found this book harder to get into at the beginning because there are so many characters introduced, the lay of the lands and preliminary story building. It really wasn’t until about halfway through that you begin to have romance I’ve found with the KA books I’ve read so far. But, keep in mind, you are dealing with 4 couples (couples just starting a relationship) who will need to learn to work together to achieve an ultimate end goal. That said, everything is needed in this book. I’m loving the main 8 characters; Mars and Silence, True and Farah, Cassius and Elena & Aramus and Ha-Lah. But I’m not a fan of a few other characters. I’m also eager to see their relationships develop. This is more of a serial, books must be read in order. In fact, the last chapter in The Beginning of Everything is chapter 35, book 2, The Plan Commences, starts with chapter 36. I’m eager to see where this whole story is going. Diving into book 2 now!

Good story, bad writing. The first book sets up nicely, but the writing throughout the series is confusing and rambling quite often. The relationships of the four couples are also very similar with each man being extremely domaneering under the guise of being “protective.” The story was good but the writing and alpha male stereotype take away from it.

Loved the story. Hated the writing.. I first discovered this story via the audiobook version and I loved it. So much so that I decided to revisit it by reading the print version. I wish I hadn't. First, the narrators of the audiobook (there were several) were incredible! I didn’t realize how talented they were until I attempted to read, instead of listen to, the book. The narrators brought the story to life, pulled me in, and, most importantly, made it coherent. I loved this story so much I binge-listened to all four books in the series. Second, the writing is bad. So bad it makes it almost impossible to read. Bad grammar. Bad syntax. Bad punctuation. I continually found myself pulled out of the story to reread what I’d just read because the writing was so bad and hard to follow. At best, it doesn’t flow and I kept stumbling over it. At worst, it was difficult to understand. Either way, I was continually pulled out of the story, which made it hard to focus and hard to want to keep reading. I wish the author would hire a professional editor to revise the book and re-release it because I would give it another go since, as I’ve already mentioned, the story itself is really good. It’s just the writing, the mechanics of it, that is very, very hard to get past. A good story is important…but it will only get you so far. If the way the story is told (for instance, how it’s written) is bad, well…it doesn’t matter how good the story is if it can’t be understand and enjoyed. If this story seems like something you’d enjoy, I HIGHLY recommend checking out the audiobook version instead of the print.

This is such a great series.. If you want magic and the land that’s varied and fun, plus sexy times. This is for you. Multi-POV.

First series I’ve wanted to review. I loved the fantasyland series and didn’t think that could be topped. The Golden dynasty is still one of my favorite stand alone books but this series overall is better. Personally I like hot sex scenes and those are spaced out more in this series than the others I’ve read but what is there is seriously hot. The storyline and characters are complex but I enjoyed getting to know them and the story wouldn’t be the same without the depth and detail to the characters. I laughed and cried and sometimes cringed. Painful beautiful ending.

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As always amazing!. To be honest at first I wasn’t sure about the structure but not to long after I started lovibg it and it is just amazing as every books that she has written!

Gross book. Books all over the place, hard to understand. Not to mention extremely messed up, never have read something so sick and disgusting in my life.