I did enjoy this. But a couple things did throw me off. Such as not knowing the main characters name until half way through. Unless I missed something. But all and all is it scary? Yes.
Very very suspenseful and well detailed
By Stg man
As a fellow author, I look up to great projects like this one. One thing to appreciate is the "voice" of the narrator. Doesn't sound too proper, yet tell vivid details. I'd love to read a full length novel of Leckman's. But all I did was search "horror" and this was one of the first pieces to pop up. I see why!👻
I good read for a short story. I liked it a lot.
Although the story was really short, I feel that the point was made. Interesting plot twist at the end. Would have loved this story to be extended with more drama.
Good but needs improvement
It was a short but pleasant read. My main critique are why was the girl in the hotel, who was she, who was she always talking to on the phone, what was her business in town? Next, a girl drinking a whole six pack of beer and eating a bunch of burritos seems unlikely. Also, why would she watch a scary movie if she is afraid of the dark. On the other hand it had a good ending.
They dont exist
By Sassy casi
This was not a very interesting book...AT ALL. I hated the language, i hated the way the author made the charectors sound..."bad." But, i did like the ending.
This book was so great, that I am going to tell all my friends and family about it.
Best horror story
I'm definitely reading this book at a campfire
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