His Naughty Maid Book Reviews

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Naughty little maid. Loved it

Errors :/. I could not finish the book due to grammar errors. It's ok for s free book, but I would not have paid for it.

Bad bad bad....and bad.. This book was terrible. The motivations and reasoning behind the characters' actions often made little to no sense. Pure idiocy drove the plot far more than compelling logic or emotion. And the grammar was so poor it makes me wonder if the author dropped out of school at age 7. This book doesn't need an editor, it needs a garbage can. It's not worth salvaging.

Not great.. I read a lot of free books, and give each a chance, even if the beginning doesn't grab me. I had a tough time with this one. This needed another proofreading. Many wrong words, wrong tense used. I just gave up. Sorry.

OMG. The grammar. The continuity. The believability. It was all missing. I should have known better than to download this atrocity without first reading the reviews.

Doesn't even deserve one star.... I'm glad this is a free book, would have to ask for a refund had I paid for it. Between the grammatical and spelling issues I wasn't able to get past 15 pages. Awful.

Awful...... Really awful. I wouldn't recommend reading this, especially if you're like me and cannot look past bad grammar and bad editing. I rarely write reviews and when I do it is because it is really good or really not.

I see why this book is free.. I suggest the author take some grammar lessons.

Terribly written. The grammar and spelling were awful. Find an editor.

Needs MAJOR editing. I couldn't get through 2 chapters because of all of the errors. L.M. Roberts PLEASE get yourself a good editor!

To Mrs Roberts. This was extremely wonderful, enjoyed reading, my kind of reading, Love Romance and Sex, great job done 5 stars from me.

Needs work. Grammar is atrocious and I am from Hawaii where we speak pidgin English, so that should speak for itself. I found myself skipping through quite a bit of it and rolling my eyes enough that my son asked if I was alright. Characters were not believable because of their broken English - I mean how many professional business people walk around saying "I seen her..."? The story line was basic and uncomfortable - at times I felt like I was back in high school with a creepy guy hitting on me. I'm not a prude, the sex scenes didn't bother me and I enjoy erotica, but I couldn't engage with the characters enough to even want to be present or witness their unrealistic encounters. I've read erotica from authors that were half the length of this book but so much better.

Amazing. The best book I have ever read!!

Omg. This book is absolutely amazing!!! I laughed/cried/got aroused/fell in love with Axel and Kay/and the lovely family they gained at the end!!!! 5,000 thumbs up to the author

Good story. Liked the story line and the characters. Good read.

Spelling errors but hot. There was SO MANY spelling and grammar errors lol it was hard to look bad but it was def a hot read

Needs editing. The grammatical errors were too distracting for me to read past page 76.

Loved it. Great read despite all the English hunters below😊 I got through the whole book and searched for the rest of the series hint hint.

Wish it was better. I wanted to like this book. Aside from the grammar which has been mentioned in all the reviews, where is the development of the plot? The characters had sex twice, barely any interaction and that includes a bunch of texts, and yet they fell in love. Fine but as readers how can we feel that from the characters? I hope the author improves in future books, the ideas behind the book are great but it needs just more.

Great idea, HORRIBLE EXECUTION!!!!. This novel was riddled with redundancies, grammatical slaughter, misuse of proper tense, and even even punctuation errors. Run on sentences, sentences that should end (but don't), improper use of "slang" and common phrasing... Every time you swipe the page, somebody "done" something. Literally how it is worded, every time. It was almost enough to give me a migraine! I'm not taking about a FEW errors, people... I'm talking about nearly EVERY SINGLE paragraph. BBBBBUUUUUUUUUTTTTTT I kept reading until the end, because the story line was actually a good one. This novel has a LOT of potential, but please, please, PLEASE INVEST IN AN EDITOR!!!!! For those of us who read literary works on a regular basis, these kinds of mistakes, in such high quantities, can actually be painful. If you take writing seriously, and you truly enjoy it, please make sure that it is also enjoyable to your entire target audience, not just the few who are "willing to let it slide." Never settle for less, especially not when you have the potential to be so much more.

Hi. Nice

Well.... The story line was great but this book really needed an editor! Thank goodness it was free because I would have been upset had I paid my money and saw a sentence that read.. "When he seen" not once but several times throughout. Edit please before publishing.

Sucked :/. Incorrect punctuation, incorrect uses of 'you're ', and lack of commas. What the heck? Was this author ten when they wrote this book?!

Utterly disgusted. This book is the worst piece of drivel that I have ever had the misfortune to encounter. It is rife with grammatical errors such that I wondered if a pre-teen had written it. The author obviously does not have any grasp on the English language and if I had my way, this book would have never even made it onto an online fan fiction website, much less be published as an iBook. I am certain that a dog could chew up a dictionary and regurgitate a better story than what I had endured. I am ashamed to say that I read over half of it; on my iPhone that translated to over 300 pages--minutes, maybe even hours of my life, wasted, that I will never regain. I am dumbfounded that there are hundreds of five star reviews. Are you all brain dead? If you read the book in entirety, perhaps. I could practically feel each individual brain cell committing suicide in sheer protest with the turn of each page. In addition to the atrocious grammar and obvious lack of proofreading, the storyline is horrendous, with little to no character development. The characters are ill thought-out and two-dimensional; their only characteristics being immaturity and petulance. They seem to have sprung from the mind of a grade schooler, which may explain why the plot is so implausible. The storyline is so far-fetched that it can only be described as fantastical at best. After all, who pays a maid (with benefits) a six-figure salary? The story rambles on as the main character, Kandace, goes from despising her boss, Axel, to wantonly vying for his attention seemingly overnight. Likewise, Axel goes from a rich playboy CEO of a sex toy empire to falling helplessly head over heels in love with his [overpaid] maid. Do not read this book, it is not worth your time. Do not even entertain the thought of paying for any of the other books written by this sorry excuse for a writer. Shame on whomever it was who convinced Roberts that she was a good writer and that she should publish a book. One word to sum up how I feel about this book: contempt. I would give this book zero stars if I could, but it looks like I will have to add this to the scores of one star reviews that I had neglected to take note of when I downloaded this very book. Heed my warning, I hope that you do not make the same mistake that I did.

Awesome. This was one of the best books that I've read in a long long time , can't wait for the next book you write . Thanks agin Stan Sharp

This book sucked. If I could give it no stars, I would. The writing was terrible...the grammar and spelling were atrocious. It made it excruciatingly difficult to read. Aside from that, the story was ridiculous. It skipped around and there was no character development. It was a chore to read.

The grammar is AWFUL. This book was written as if it was never proof read or edited! The grammar and spelling were so bad that I question whether or not the author made it through elementary school. The story was okay but so difficult to read with errors in almost every sentence. I'm not an English teacher but this was painful.

Not bad.. Story is good but its like there are chapters or story missing... like how did kandace and axel fell in love with each other. What and how did it happened? Reading it made me wanna make love with my man.

Great story, horrible grammar.. The story itself was fantastic, and interesting! The writing, sentence structure, and grammar, however, were horrendous! I would assume that no editor was used, which is too bad. Basic grammar corrections would have made this book a better read!

OMG THOSE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!!. First book I "try" to read from this author but just couldn't get past the first couple of chapters because of all the grammatical errors!! So annoying having to re-read sentences to try to make sense of what she was trying to say. Was there no proof reading prior to printing?? And to think this is the 1st book of a series!! No bueno!! Now I understand why this is a free book. So glad I didn't pay for it because I would be asking for my money back...

Fifty Shades of Knockoff. Another wonderful knockoff of the most popular erotic trilogy, Fifty Shades of Grey, I bring you His Naughty Maid. In this erotic novel, we meet Kandy Kane otherwise known as Kandace Kross, a stripper from the Miami area who becomes Axel Hart's, CEO of Hart's Inc., a company specializing in sex toys, maid. Being that Axel is already on the lookout for Kandace's alter ego to headline his "Get Down and Dirty With Axel" sex toys, he simply can't put two and two together. When I first picked up this book on my iPad, I had hoped that it was going to be a fantastic read, especially for my down time I had between my classes and my job. I was horribly wrong. Other than the fact that the plot has holes in it, the author's spelling and grammar could be bested by seven year olds which is NO COMPLIMENT. Please do yourself and your readers a favor, and stick to motherhood and your criminal justice program.

His naughty maid. The book is great. Loved every minute of it.

I love it. I love His Naughty Maid i want to know what happens after they had their twins please write another book please please I couldn't stop reading the book every chance I got I was glued to the book.

Grammar Natzi Alert!. This book was horribly written! I felt like I was reading an illiterate 15 year old boys diary. I couldn't even finish the first chapter because the grammar was so horrible. Keep practicing and learning!

Where was the editor?. Like others have said, the writing is really bad in this book. The grammar, spelling and punctuation errors made it difficult to follow an already convoluted storyline. There is a lot I will forgive when the material is free. But, this was the worst I've ever seen. Don't waste your time.

The grammatical errors make this unreadable. All the reviews aghast at the grammar in this book are spot-on; I have never read a book this poorly written and I've read a lot of free books. Give this one a miss.

Just my opinion..... The book itself was rather good, but the grammatical errors were hard to get past for someone as picky as I am. 👍🏻 on the actual story line and the flow of the book.

Bad Grammar. Good storyline but was very unimpressed with the lack of care for the grammar used. Absolutely would not recommend this book to anyone solely on the fact that it was very difficult to read with the amount of grammatical errors in every single sentence.

his naughty maid. it was graet

Poor to Non-Existent Editing. The lack of editing and plethora of grammatical errors made this book distracting and impossible to read. Without exaggeration, there were errors on almost every page. It’s a poor excuse for a book. The plot and character devlopment are sorely lacking in this book. This alpha male goes from king of all he surveys to declaring his love in about two paragraphs. It was actually laughable. Don’t waste your time reading this one (I wish I hadn’t)

His Naughty Maid. I very much like your work, it is very sexy😘I noticed you have many grammar problems such as below: 1) you tend to confuse these word usage quite a bit: too/to, their/there, then/ than 2) several sentence structure are off where wrong choice of words are used causing reader confusion: such as a sentence with a negative meaning is followed by the opposite meaning in the following sentence. 3) I believe their contract is not legally binding due to the subject matter. You might need to make it clear to make the story more realistic and not confuse readers. I hope my feedback will help you fix those errors as I think you are a very good writer. I like your inventive scenario for this book too. I wish you the best of luck with getting your college degree!

His naughty maid. It's was ok.

Grammar. After several spelling errors and after the second time I noticed "seen" being used I couldn't read any more.

Not readable. Don't know how this reached top charts list. Sounds like an OK plot, but the prose is unreadable. Couldn't get into it at the beginning or skipping ahead. Better choices in free books out there.

Naughty maid. Completely loved this book!

Horribly written. "I seen" "They done" Seriously? How did this get published?

Okay. It was an okay book and a decent read

Wow!!. This book was amazing, I love this book! There was no doubt about it! Me and my girlfriend read the whole thing and it blow are minds away

"What was you told yesterday Tony?". W.T.everloving.F? Atrocious grammar and punctuation. Kayne says (in equally bad grammar) "I'ma let you finish..." Well, I'm not. Delete.

Poorly Written. Nothing about the story is appealing. I am not a grammar snob but the writing style and grammatical errors were so frequent that I became distracted and had to quit reading. I'm so glad I didn't ahead to pay for this book. I would have been the greatest waste of money.

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Ernie Wise the book wot I wrote!. The English is so bad you have to keep reading to see if it really is that bad. Weak story full of errors.

Bad!. Sorry I wrote such a crap book. I dong expect you to finish it!

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Review on his naughty maid. It was good coz I liked it

Terrible grammar and editing. I never write reviews. But I had to stop reading and write this review I've only got to chapter 3 and there are so many errors I'm not even sure I'll enjoy the rest of the book. Get someone to edit it and republish. The idea of the story is okay and it might be worthwhile. Really glad I didn't pay for this.

Wow! Couldn't put down. Loved this story about Axel & Kandace! Story drew you in & kept you entertained through out! Just got next book can't wait to see what happens to next Hart brother 😊

Please get an Editor. I am a few pages in and can't go any further. It is full of elementary grammatical mistakes. It is not "the only person I would have went down to my knees for ..." but, rather, "the only person for whom I would have gone down on my knees ..." It may well be a good story, but I will never find out because it is too torturous to read such language.

His naughty maid. This was an ok read, the main male character was a bit crass though. I would have liked to see a bit more depth and substance to the story. The spelling and grammar was really bad, I would be happy to proof read and spell check for you anytime.

Please don't waste your time. I read until the end, I guess to see if this "book" would get better... it did not. It's not just that there is no plot or feeling of reality to the story, but the grammar and sentence construction leaves me stunned. Not too much is misspelled, but possibly someone should have proofread before publishing this tripe. Fortunately I am not out of pocket, or I would be asking for my money back.

A little proof reading goes a long way. I wanted to enjoy this book, but the constant spelling and grammar errors (than instead of then, lite instead of light) made it impossible to immerse myself. The story line is alright but when you're faced with multiple errors on every page it's hard to really get into.

Spelling mistakes everywhere. The sheer amount of spelling errors and use of incorrect words made this story almost unbearable. The main male character is so unpleasant, it's a tough read.

Grammar killed this story!!. Could not get past all the errors. Really took away from the story, which was alright. Had more potential than delivered.

His Naughty Maid. The use of the English language in this book is atrocious, I am not sure if English is not your first language or if you were bought up in the backwoods. What may have been an enjoyable story was destroyed by the butchering of the language and what is with calling people you are intimate and supposedly in love with Mr and Ms. It is a ridiculous and tired, well worn premise. I wouldn't read another story by this author, I couldn't even finish this one.

Yikes. Editing was poor, made me cringe while reading. Prologue was intriguing...ending was abrupt

Such a shame!. I've read a few minutes in, and although the story held my interest, I cannot handle all the bad grammar! Such a terrible waste, if the book was re-edited I feel it would be well worth the read!

Bad grammar, poor editing!. The wrong they're was used and done was used instead of did several times.

Poor grammar, spelling and punctuation. This story is completely ruined by poor grammar, spelling and punctuation. Did anyone read it before publishing?

**SPELLING + GRAMMAR**. Not a bad story line but some proof reading would've gone a long way! If you can ignore the errors, it's a good read. Good, not great.

Not worthy of a one star rating. Main male character really is a dirt bag. Terribly written. Had to delete.

Love the characters. I fell in love with Axel & Kandice great story Only thing that ruined it was not editing the story the number of grammatical errors took away from the story (PLEASE check all the words "seen" for a start)

Terrible. Needs to be proofread. Bad English. Needs punctuation. Wrong words. Story is ok but I just couldn't get past the writing style to finish it. Sorry.

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Read naughtily. As the title really proves its contents which includes sexy, uncivilized comments and a realistic contract with Axel. Reality bites but Love this book.

Atrocious. In my entire 14 years of living I have never witnessed anything more horrendous than this “story”. The grammar is despicable, the dialogue hilariously unsexy, and the characters are bland and one dimensional. And Axel acts like a freaking dork. Sorry, really doubt he’s picking up chicks. “Come for me my sweet.” EW! Like he’s actually disgusting. Bye!

His naughty. Playfully sexy, endearing and sweet, love knows no boundaries with Axel and Kandace. Great chemistry, passion and a feel good tale! Loved it!

His Naughty Maid. This author needs to work on his/her grammar. I had a difficult time reading this book and ended up quitting before reaching chapter 4!